Reflection

stephcha@nmsu.edu

Well this one was at white sands national monument. It is about an hour away from my house. Again this is one of my Famous Models (LOL) Cori. Poor thing i think if she gets her pic taken anymore she is going to puke at the site of another camera lens.


I tried some post production on it, let see what i missed


steve

lynnma

stephcha@nmsu.edu wrote:

Well this one was at white sands national monument. It is about an hour away from my house. Again this is one of my Famous Models () Cori. Poor thing i think if she gets her pic taken anymore she is going to puke at the site of another camera lens.


I tried some post production on it, let see what i missed


steve

Hi Steve can we see it bigger please? it's hard to critique when so small

stephcha@nmsu.edu

lynnma wrote:

Hi Steve can we see it bigger please? it's hard to critique when so small

i am going to get a smugmug account soon.... i am limited to the size of the posting because of the "size" req on the attachments.

steve

eye-max

Hi Steve,

I don't normally do portraits so what I say might lead you astray, but here's what I think;
I like the picture. A little small for critiquing. I'd crop out some of the white area above the models head. I'd also like to see her turned towards the center of the image. However it is a nice picture. Look forward to seeing more.

Photosbychuck

Hi, stephcha@nmsu.edu
Cori looks great as always and I like the pose.
From the left side I would turn her toward the center of the shot.
Maybe a pose in front of the bush would work if, you want both oh them in the photo. Cori should get you to post her email if, she is interested in modeling work. I would like to see a larger photo of the shot also.


Take Care,
Chuck

DoctorIt

Composition and idea looks very cool. But like Lynn said, if you want some real comments, we have to be able to see it!