crayons

Guppy

Here's what i'm thinking for my entry. What do you think?

Frog Lady

childs play?
interesting concept...but I think you need to be bolder. Bigger, thicker crayons/markers w/ bigger, thicker lines. I do like the curves but think they went OOF too fast; oh, and make sure the crayons are crisp.

good luck

devbobo

Guppy,

You have done very well with this image.

Perhaps, try the same shot but try varying the lightsource, both position and angle.

I can't quite put my finger on it, but there is something distracting about the light being so focused on the crayons. Does that sense ?

Good luck...hope this is of some help.

David

Angelo

I think it's a cute idea but be careful with your focus and I think a color bump would help. If you search for one of Andy's threads, it deals with turning a background white.

jwear

a good idea ---with even better advice

Tessa HD

i'll second that