Kids in S.A.

Freaking GeniusFreaking Genius Registered Users Posts: 6 Beginner grinner
edited February 25, 2006 in People
Comments and advice are appreciated...



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  • adrian_kadrian_k Registered Users Posts: 557 Major grins
    edited February 24, 2006
    I'm suprised that there're no comments on this - I think it's a fine photo.
    It's a pity that the boy on the left is not looking at the camera - but you knew that already, didn't you. :D
    was that on-board flash - it's come out well.
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  • W.W. WebsterW.W. Webster Registered Users Posts: 3,204 Major grins
    edited February 24, 2006
    adrian_k wrote:
    It's a pity that the boy on the left is not looking at the camera
    ... and that the top of the other boy's head has been clipped.
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  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited February 25, 2006
    First, sweet smiles and good looking subjects. You got them at a good time, nice job. Second, nice use of daytime fill flash. Third, the kid to the right is a bit brighter than the one on the left, I guess because he's closer to the flash, pity. Fourth, I'd be tempted to crop a wee bit from the right side. That will place the kids a tiny bit closer to the right edge of the shot, and make it a bit more dynamic.
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