CH59 2nd try, thoughts again?
Thusie
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I think you need to either give it more space at the top, or crop it to less - just having that thin line above the metal of the handle makes it feel cut off. Kinda like this:
Or you could do something different... like one half dark, one half light, etc.
I hope you don't mind me messing with your image. Just trying to give you ideas.
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Ok a little more on the top.
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Tamron AF18-200mm F3.5-6.3 XR Di II LD
Tamron SP AF17-50mm F/2.8 XR Di II LD Aspherical
Nikon 60mm f/2.8D AF Micro-Nikkor
Nikon SB-800 Speedlight
All of the textures connote "roughness." A very creative photo, too. Good job, Thusie. The browns and cremes complement each other nicely.
love the textures, especially the wood with the rough, dirty/greasiness to it. good catch!
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