My first impression is "Wow that is bright white at the top!". I think it really draws attention away from her. I'm not sure how I feel about her hiding behind her arm. On one hand I would like to see more of her face but on the other that could be what you were going for, kind of a mischievous look in her eye.
She definitely looks a like an attractive woman. With that said, I would like to see her face, rather than it be hidden behind her arm. However, depending on how you look at it, one could say that she sort of this mysterious type of girl. I dunno. Definitely a good start, but if you can, I would try to get her in different poses.
-Nick-
20D l BG-E2 l 17-40L l 24-105L l 50mm 1.8 mKII l 430ex
shot of a friend of mine on the weekend not sure what to think
Of the shot - or your friend?
Just kidding.....Lovely picture, the look in her eyes are piercing. And her body language follows, she looks very comfortable in her skin.
The comp is throwing me off a bit though - my eyes keep staring at that big white space up there.
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Nice curves, better noted in the panoramic format.
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Of the shot - or your friend?
Just kidding.....Lovely picture, the look in her eyes are piercing. And her body language follows, she looks very comfortable in her skin.
The comp is throwing me off a bit though - my eyes keep staring at that big white space up there.