Ch 61 - My try at it

snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
edited April 2, 2006 in The Dgrin Challenges
Is this too much color or not enough?

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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,967 moderator
    edited March 28, 2006
    snapapple wrote:
    Is this too much color or not enough?
    Too much, I would guess. Nice idea though. I like the composition.

    Cheers,
  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited March 29, 2006
    Another try
    Thanks for the comment. I guess everyone agrees.
    So, I tried another one. A bit less color, lots of contrast. I like this better. Critique welcome.

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  • MTagMTag Registered Users Posts: 17 Big grins
    edited March 29, 2006
    I would agree that the first has a lot of color but great balance!! I really like your second shot.
  • dkoyanagidkoyanagi Registered Users Posts: 656 Major grins
    edited March 29, 2006
    I agree, the first one is too colorful. I like the second one.
  • cabbeycabbey Registered Users Posts: 1,053 Major grins
    edited March 30, 2006
    Both are beautifull shots, but neither of them make me think they were shot originally in b/w... especially not with that deep blue background.

    (A third image along that line would probably result in a nice triptych though)
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  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2006
    cabbey wrote:
    Both are beautifull shots, but neither of them make me think they were shot originally in b/w... especially not with that deep blue background.

    BLUE? On my monitor it looks totally black. It IS black. I don't understand why you see blue. On the first shot it looks a little blue in the area of the clear plate. That's the glass I guess. The second shot is definitely black.

    Maybe you don't think "black and white" when you see them because there is no gray. I think a black and white photo is really gray tones. Neither of these has any gray. A photo with deep black and bright white is B&W but looks more like "modern art" than a "black and white" photo. So, I'm not sure about these for the challenge. I like No. 2 myself. It is black and white, but does it look like a black and white photo? Is that what the challenge requuires? If I can't come up with something better this weekend, I'll just have to leave it to the judges to decide.
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  • Nee7x7Nee7x7 Registered Users Posts: 459 Major grins
    edited March 31, 2006
    Hi Snapapple,

    I like the second shot, too, but I'd have to agree it doesn't look like a B&W photo. I think the concept behind the challenge is to shoot a pic in color that could be mistaken for a B&W photo, with just a smidgen of color to surprise the viewer into realizing it's actually a color photo. Sort of a fool-the-eye sort of thing. Anyhow, that's how I interpret it, but I've been known to be wrong more often than not, lol!

    Cheers!
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  • cabbeycabbey Registered Users Posts: 1,053 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2006
    snapapple wrote:
    BLUE? On my monitor it looks totally black. It IS black. I don't understand why you see blue. On the first shot it looks a little blue in the area of the clear plate. That's the glass I guess. The second shot is definitely black.

    Photoshop's color picker says the background of the second one is averaging around 240 degree Hue, 80 to 100% saturation, brightness in the 3 to 10% range. On my calibrated display at least, that's a beautifull deep navy blue.

    Ignoring the glass, the first one is almost completely black, except for a couple areas of up to 6% brightness that look like a high spot in the fabric the plate is sitting on? there's one that is a triangular shape on the lower left corner that really shows up.

    At least that's what I see here.

    This "screen shot" (1.3M png file) actually shows it fairly well. The colors in it aren't perfect, in fact they are about 2x brighter than my screen shows, but the relative coloration is... it shows the triangular detail I'm talking about.
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  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2006
    Now I see what you're saying. I tried the color picker thing. The whole image had a blue cast. So, I adjusted the balance and came up with this.
    Of course this is shot in color so there is a lot of colors in black. That's the nature of black. The white had a blue cast so I took that out.
    What do you think?
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    Here's another possibility. A different composition. I adjusted the white balance to try for true white and true black.
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    Or how about this?
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    Or this?
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  • Art ScottArt Scott Registered Users Posts: 8,959 Major grins
    edited April 1, 2006
    snapapple wrote:
    Now I see what you're saying. I tried the color picker thing. The whole image had a blue cast. So, I adjusted the balance and came up with this.
    Of course this is shot in color so there is a lot of colors in black. That's the nature of black. The white had a blue cast so I took that out.
    What do you think?
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    Here's another possibility. A different composition. I adjusted the white balance to try for true white and true black.
    62493340-L.jpg

    I like these 'uns........... Great thumb.gif
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  • cabbeycabbey Registered Users Posts: 1,053 Major grins
    edited April 2, 2006
    snapapple wrote:
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    Ah, now that's black and white. thumb.gif I think I like these two the best of the four... the one with the strainer probably has the most "black and white" image look to it, since it has the various shades of grey working in it.
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  • mr peasmr peas Registered Users Posts: 1,369 Major grins
    edited April 2, 2006
    sorry for posting late :food

    i like this one a lot

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    now.. i think you can crop out the entire black bg and have the polka dots as the bg alone. that i think would make the image really pop out. it would make the viewer take a second and examine what theyre looking at. cut out the black, leave the plate and the strawberry. lets see it!thumb.gif
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