dayTrip

George.George. Registered Users Posts: 43 Big grins
edited March 30, 2006 in Landscapes
Hi -
This was my first proper trip out with my camera. I went to an antique store to check out some stuff for work. I know theres alot of photos but thought id punch em all up online. I was trying to teach myseld DOF with teh aperture settings on the camera and using differnt angles, etc. Very minimal P/S done, basic levels and cropping on one or two images.
Results? below what do u think??

albums.jpg

bases.jpg

blu.jpg

chairs.jpg

colors.jpg

cups.jpg

doors.jpg

dummy.jpg

grease.jpg

lamp.jpg

petrol.jpg

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  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited March 30, 2006
    no expert I, but I enjoyed the colors, composition, variety-

    only complaint was the lack of dof on the can shot, did not see the point on that for shallow dof unless you were working on that-

    remember, if you want some indepth c&c, stick your best up on the whipping post-

    thanks for sharing-

    george
  • George.George. Registered Users Posts: 43 Big grins
    edited March 30, 2006
    gefillmore wrote:
    no expert I, but I enjoyed the colors, composition, variety-

    only complaint was the lack of dof on the can shot, did not see the point on that for shallow dof unless you were working on that-

    remember, if you want some indepth c&c, stick your best up on the whipping post-

    thanks for sharing-

    george


    thanks for the views George__ with the can shot i was trying to go for a deeper dof but didnt quite get there , hahahhh as u can see.

    i would love some further 'whippings' on these shots - maybe a moderator can move the thread????
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    thanks
  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited March 30, 2006
    you can just post one a week on whipping post-

    pick your best, go for it and post it-

    george
  • Scott_QuierScott_Quier Registered Users Posts: 6,524 Major grins
    edited March 30, 2006
    George. wrote:
    thanks for the views George__ with the can shot i was trying to go for a deeper dof but didnt quite get there , hahahhh as u can see.

    i would love some further 'whippings' on these shots - maybe a moderator can move the thread????
    mwink.gif


    thanks
    General comment - for deeper DOF, decrease the aperature (make the aperature number larger). To compensate for the reduced amont of light to the sensor, either increase the ISO or decrease the shutter speed (or both).

    The colors of the urns (or whatever they are) are very nice. It appears the focus was on the most distant of the group. The foreground items were not quite in focus. Also, moving to the left a little might have reduced the glare on the sides of the urns - maybe?

    You got the DOF thing working nicely (IMO) on the gold and red box pic. Crop out the shelf edge on the right of the picture and you will greatly improve the image. Same thing for the chair and stuff on the left. Should leave you with a very nice portrait format image.
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