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Challenge 63 - Gleaming Secrets

sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
edited April 21, 2006 in The Dgrin Challenges
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Exposure 4 seconds.
comments, critiques criticisms and advice all welcome :D
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    firedancing4lifefiredancing4life Registered Users Posts: 550 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    sayntbrigid wrote:
    65493149-L.jpg

    comments, critiques criticisms and advice all welcome :D

    link is dead...can you fix ne_nau.gif
    Kevin
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    sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    Thank You FD4Life.....hows that? I had external linking disabled. headscratch.gifuhoh:D
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    firedancing4lifefiredancing4life Registered Users Posts: 550 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    sayntbrigid wrote:
    Thank You FD4Life.....hows that? I had external linking disabled. headscratch.gifuhoh:D

    I see it now.

    It seems a little dark. Is that one of those crystal things from the ocean floor? You might tweak the white balance a bit?

    Cool idea.
    Kevin
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    firedancing4lifefiredancing4life Registered Users Posts: 550 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    I think it def looks better. This picture makes me curious. What's the whole piece looks like? I like the framming, but would prefer if the sphere wasn't chopped off at the top. Give it some room to breathe. Just a thought...but what do I know.
    Kevin
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    sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    firedancing4life wrote:
    I think it def looks better. This picture makes me curious. What's the whole piece looks like? I like the framming, but would prefer if the sphere wasn't chopped off at the top. Give it some room to breathe. Just a thought...but what do I know.

    arite......will do some reshoots....I think your right.....thank you :D
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    sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    firedancing4life wrote:
    I think it def looks better. This picture makes me curious. What's the whole piece looks like? I like the framming, but would prefer if the sphere wasn't chopped off at the top. Give it some room to breathe. Just a thought...but what do I know.

    They are quarts crystals, and the dark one is citrine :D
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    sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    65504398-L.jpg

    hows this one?
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    gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    You have asked for opinions ...It just isnt ringing my bell.

    The title is, as always..is subjective but to me when asked for a 'longer' exposure i would perhaps choose a subject that shows time lapse. A simple explanation would be something like this showing the passing of time.

    Your crystal does not (to me) show a longer exposure. Its also quite out of focus or soft from a large crop headscratch.gif .
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    gubbsgubbs Registered Users Posts: 3,166 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    Humungus wrote:
    when asked for a 'longer' exposure i would perhaps choose a subject that shows time lapse. A simple explanation would be something like this showing the passing of time.
    Hi Gus,

    I'm hoping to see shots that demonstrate a lapse of time, but I'm equally keen to see shots that use the available light too!
    Plus, of course any other effects that long exposures can create, such as the misting of waves, mirror like reflections, painting with light, zoom blurs, motion blurs, flash, strobe flash, etc etc etc....1 second or over is the only restriction thumb.gif
    gubbs
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    ultravoxultravox Registered Users Posts: 776 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    Gus, Gubbs, perhaps you should try this http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=32421rolleyes1.gif
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    gubbsgubbs Registered Users Posts: 3,166 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    ultravox wrote:
    Gus, Gubbs, perhaps you should try this http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=32421rolleyes1.gif

    Thanks, but no thanks :D
    gubbs
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    gusgus Registered Users Posts: 16,209 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    ultravox wrote:
    Gus, Gubbs, perhaps you should try this http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=32421rolleyes1.gif
    I get the joke rolleyes1.gif ..yeah that was a cat fight & a half. I dont enter many of the challenges & if i see someone asking then i will always offer my perception of what the judges are asking for. Really i dont care what they choose but we should never be afraid to offer someone help/ideas if they are asking for it.
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    twinbnjtwinbnj Registered Users Posts: 271 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    The first shot was too dark as mentioned. The second post looks over processed and grainy to me. Did you reshoot or process the original?
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    cletuscletus Registered Users Posts: 1,930 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    sayntbrigid wrote:
    Thank you so much for all the imput......how bout this one.....more what I was trying to capture, the rainbows in the crystal

    65523202-S.jpg

    Definitely a step in the right direction thumb.gif

    There's still room for improvement though.
    • The bright highlights bother me. To me they overpower the rest of the image. What were you using as a light source? Is there any way you could diffuse the light?
    • The image still seems a bit noisy. I saw in the EXIF that you we already at ISO 80, so I'm not sure there's much you can do about it.
    • I'd like to see more of the image in focus. If you can, use a smaller aperture.
    I saw from the EXIF data that your using a Kodak C340. This is going to be a really tough challenge topic with a camera without manual controls.

    Good luck!
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    sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    Thank for your imput Cletus, I am just a beginner, but I am already looking forward to a better camera......but not to worry, I dont let my camera stop me :D
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    sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2006
    You know what Cletus, in a way, having the camera, sorta makes the challenges even more challenging.......and FUN......I think I found a way to soften the glare you are talking about, I did a reverse layer on it......and I think it looks better......but thats not to say I wont come up with an even better idea.........or mebbe somebody else will ......but I am certainly learning a lot, and having a lot of fun along the way :D
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