Challenge 24 - Freeups Landscapes

FreeUps

Here are some shots from yesterday guys. I'm not sure how well they fit into landscapes, but I'll keep at it. Enjoy!

Central park - Autumn Walk. Its me in the shot. I set the timer and walked away from the camera.


Autumn Leaf. Inspired by Lynns last submission.


Me again, self timer. Some real trial and error here.


Could I pull of cityscape with this one?

ian408

The leaf on water is a great shot. I'd love to see what the path you're walking
down in the first leads to.

But the third shot is the one I like.

Ian

ish

I like the concept of the first one, but I am not sure if I like you in the direct middle, and blurry. I am sure that is the effect you wanted, and a part of me likes it, but it also throws me a little when the colors and crispness of the rest of the shot is so vibrant.

The second one is super textured and really cool in the shade it is in. Good stuff~

I like the composition of the third shot a lot. YOu really found a nice lighting scenario and the subtly foggy aspect is giving a lot of mood.

Nice shots~

judyfuess

I love the third shot!!! The pose is perfect for under a bridge.

digismile

I think these are great shots . I especially like the s/p under the bridge. You have great creativity in all your photos. For what it's worth, my only thought is that other than the leaf, these shots might not quite fit for the challenge theme. But that might just be me ...

I look forward to seeing lots of your creations over time!

Regards,
Brad

FreeUps

Thank you guys!

Digi, I kinda thought that I kept missing the challenge guidlines as I kept shooting more and more. I wasn't clicking with the traditional landscape shots that day, so this is what I ended up with! I'm happy for sure, but its time for me to get out there and try again.

Thanks all,
Marshall

miketaylor01

I have to agree with digi in that esides the leaf not of these images fit the traditional landscape theme. But you never know what might be accepted. I think all of these are great shots with the first being my favorite. I love how everything around you is in really sharp focus wile your outline is just there. Kind like the background jumps out at the viewer around your body. Nice job. Also, it looks like the leaf is in a puccle of oil. I dont know how you did this but it looks awesome.

dragon300zx

I really like #3 the most. They are all excellent shots but that one just grabs my attention more. The leafscape will probably work the best for the challenge though.

aero-nut

I agree....I think the last photo is most fitting for the theme of the challenge, however I love the second photo. Very sharp, deep textures...

FreeUps

I'm torn,, I like 2 and I like 3. Dunno whats more fitting though.

snapapple

FreeUps wrote:

I'm torn,, I like 2 and I like 3. Dunno whats more fitting though.

FreeUps,
No. 1 has real nice color and a nice long view into the landscape if it were not blocked by your body. I think I can imagine it with you about 20 to 30 feet down the path. Might be nice with a yellow rain coat or even just a trench coat and hat. Would be nice with an adult holding a childs hand. Or a man with a black overcoat and black umbrella.

No. 2 is a beautiful pondscape or puddlescape. I love the tonal qualities of it and the slickness of the water. Very nice composition with the curve on the left and the way the leaf lies. Very original. Unique.

No. 3 also qualifies as a landscape as Andy defines it. It's a "keyhole" view into a landscape. It has nice curves and the human element adds to that. Your decision. Which do like?

cmr164

snapapple wrote:

FreeUps,
No. 1 has real nice color and a nice long view into the landscape if it were not blocked by your body. I think I can imagine it with you about 20 to 30 feet down the path. Might be nice with a yellow rain coat or even just a trench coat and hat. Would be nice with an adult holding a childs hand. Or a man with a black overcoat and black umbrella.

No. 2 is a beautiful pondscape or puddlescape. I love the tonal qualities of it and the slickness of the water. Very nice composition with the curve on the left and the way the leaf lies. Very original. Unique.

No. 3 also qualifies as a landscape as Andy defines it. It's a "keyhole" view into a landscape. It has nice curves and the human element adds to that. Your decision. Which do like?

Snappy's assessments are spot on. I would just add the caveat that you should specifically get Andy's stamp of "on topic" as his idea of that is sometimes surprising.

pathfinder

snapapple wrote:

FreeUps,
No. 1 has real nice color and a nice long view into the landscape if it were not blocked by your body. I think I can imagine it with you about 20 to 30 feet down the path. Might be nice with a yellow rain coat or even just a trench coat and hat. Would be nice with an adult holding a childs hand. Or a man with a black overcoat and black umbrella.

No. 2 is a beautiful pondscape or puddlescape. I love the tonal qualities of it and the slickness of the water. Very nice composition with the curve on the left and the way the leaf lies. Very original. Unique.

No. 3 also qualifies as a landscape as Andy defines it. It's a "keyhole" view into a landscape. It has nice curves and the human element adds to that. Your decision. Which do like?

Like Snappy said - your torso is too close and too dominating in the first image - it would be much better if you were 20 or 30 feet down the path as a part of the landscape rather than the largest part of the image.
The sepia leaf in the water is nicely done with very good technical quality but does not really ring my bell and I like leaf shots - I have posted several - but I prefer them in color usually. Snappy liked it alot, so the failing is probably mine. She has good taste.

The tunnel seems ominous to me, kind of frightening, not a warm and comfortable place like the lighter warmer trees and leaves beyond. The G Blur works well.

jwear

# 3 bridge looks good well done the leaf i almost like but it looks like it's in mercury i can not say. but again these are opinions, art is in the eye of the artist but you are to close that seems more like fact