Did I over do the Shot?

ridetwistyroadsridetwistyroads Registered Users Posts: 526 Major grins
edited May 9, 2006 in Landscapes
Pretty Blue Ridge Parkway shot - but did I over gonzo in post?

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Thanks for any input,
Chris
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    i think this is beautiful it needs a white horse running on road
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  • DanielBDanielB Registered Users Posts: 2,362 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    i don't think you went overboard... but i think the white on the grass is distracting and it pulls your eyes away from the road... if you could clone it out it would make the image heaps betterthumb.gif i think Awais is onto something... what you need is an Amish carriage about halway disappearing through the fog on the road... that'd be killer.
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  • Yvette MarieYvette Marie Registered Users Posts: 57 Big grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    Sir,

    If this is in NC where you live? Scoot over.. Im movin in next door!

    I dont think its overdone at all.. how gorgeous!

    Yvette
  • USAIRUSAIR Registered Users Posts: 2,646 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    I guess it depends on the look you were going for
    I think it's awesome paintery effect very cool
    But I like that kinda stuff.
    Some may not like the effect

    Care to share you how you did it ?

    Thanks
    Fred
  • ridetwistyroadsridetwistyroads Registered Users Posts: 526 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    DanielB wrote:
    i don't think you went overboard... but i think the white on the grass is distracting and it pulls your eyes away from the road... if you could clone it out it would make the image heaps betterthumb.gif i think Awais is onto something... what you need is an Amish carriage about halway disappearing through the fog on the road... that'd be killer.

    Well, it's the blue ridge parkway with a 45mph speed limit. If you find an Amish buggy that can do that..... I'm in. :):

    The white in the grass is a gravel road going into the orchard there. I'll see if I can tone it down a bit.
    "There is a place for me somewhere, where I can write and speak much as I think, and make it pay for my living and some besides. Just where this place is I have small idea now, but I am going to find it" Carl Sandburg
  • ridetwistyroadsridetwistyroads Registered Users Posts: 526 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    USAIR wrote:

    Care to share you how you did it ?

    Thanks
    Fred

    http://www.dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=2530
    Stumbled across a neat plug in. Can't remember the settings I used in the plug in, but it took a few tries with leveling/USM before the effect was applied to get the right look in the end. Sort of a "feel it out" deal.


    Thank you ALL for the kind words thumb.gif

    Ps-Yvette, there's plenty of room here thumb.gif (allthough - WHY you'd want to leave wyoming I don't understand!:D)
    "There is a place for me somewhere, where I can write and speak much as I think, and make it pay for my living and some besides. Just where this place is I have small idea now, but I am going to find it" Carl Sandburg
  • USAIRUSAIR Registered Users Posts: 2,646 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    Thanks for the link thats a good plugin..I love plugins
    Here's a couple Deep Paint and Final Impact Vivida
    Both free
    Here's a tutorial on Deep Paint

    Fred
  • ridetwistyroadsridetwistyroads Registered Users Posts: 526 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    USAIR wrote:
    Thanks for the link thats a good plugin..I love plugins
    Here's a couple Deep Paint and Final Impact Vivida
    Both free
    Here's a tutorial on Deep Paint

    Fred

    I really like Vivida - have had it a while, still kind of fumbly for me to use though.

    I'll download and play with Deep Paint. Thank ya. thumb.gif
    "There is a place for me somewhere, where I can write and speak much as I think, and make it pay for my living and some besides. Just where this place is I have small idea now, but I am going to find it" Carl Sandburg
  • DavidTODavidTO Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 19,160 Major grins
    edited May 7, 2006
    You blew out the sky, and the shot is overall too yellow.

    Did you shoot RAW? You could perhaps pull out some of the sky if you did, with a two-pass processing. In any case, it is totally blown out, and that's not good, IMO. Ideally you would have some detail in there, but even if you don't, make some, or at least add some gray.

    I'm split on the gravel road, but I think I come down on the side of clone it out.


    EDIT: I forgot to say: It's got a peaceful, easy feeling (a la The Eagles), and I enjoy looking at it. Even though it's got nothing but a road curving off in the distance, it's perty.
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  • ridetwistyroadsridetwistyroads Registered Users Posts: 526 Major grins
    edited May 8, 2006
    DavidTO wrote:
    You blew out the sky, and the shot is overall too yellow.

    Did you shoot RAW? You could perhaps pull out some of the sky if you did, with a two-pass processing. In any case, it is totally blown out, and that's not good, IMO. Ideally you would have some detail in there, but even if you don't, make some, or at least add some gray.

    I'm split on the gravel road, but I think I come down on the side of clone it out.


    EDIT: I forgot to say: It's got a peaceful, easy feeling (a la The Eagles), and I enjoy looking at it. Even though it's got nothing but a road curving off in the distance, it's perty.

    The sky was actually not blown out before I ran the plugin. I didn't really mind the fact that afterwords the sky went south, but, I'll toy with getting some texture in there. I'll probably just drop down the level of highlights before running it. But, I'll fool with it a while.

    Most everyone I've shown this to didn't like the gravel. It's gonna go.

    Thanks for the edit - that's the magic of living here. NC has alot of that simplistic beauty.

    Edit of my own: I am going to print it and take a look at it under some different lighting before I decide if I want to loose the yellow tint.
    "There is a place for me somewhere, where I can write and speak much as I think, and make it pay for my living and some besides. Just where this place is I have small idea now, but I am going to find it" Carl Sandburg
  • R JohnsR Johns Registered Users Posts: 170 Major grins
    edited May 8, 2006
    This scene has the feeling, that no one has ever treaded there. Like, the road was put in its place, but never travelled on. Very, very peaceful. My wife and I almost moved to Ashville, NC. What a beautiful place to be. We ultimately settled down in Leelanau County, MI. (another area with surreal landscapes).

    I am glad that you are going to get rid of that gravel road. it's what keeps it from being a truly hallmark image. Another thing that I'd play with (but it doesn't detract), would be to complete the mist, so that it trails all along the ridge of trees, in the farground (is that a word?headscratch.gif).

    Sorry, one more thought; if the image became too yellow, due to your trying to make the painted lines in the road stand out, try selecting just the painted lines, then adjust your yellow saturation.

    Thanks for sharing...

    Russ
    By Grace, alone...
  • mereimagemereimage Registered Users Posts: 448 Major grins
    edited May 8, 2006
    Nice pic
    It looks similar to the tech. of guassian blur overlay as described by M Reichmann: http://luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/gaussian.shtml

    Mereimage
  • ridetwistyroadsridetwistyroads Registered Users Posts: 526 Major grins
    edited May 9, 2006
    mereimage wrote:
    It looks similar to the tech. of guassian blur overlay as described by M Reichmann: http://luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/gaussian.shtml

    Mereimage

    I loved the tutorial, thank you. thumb.gif I'll be working with that, a few files came to mind right off!
    "There is a place for me somewhere, where I can write and speak much as I think, and make it pay for my living and some besides. Just where this place is I have small idea now, but I am going to find it" Carl Sandburg
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