Fun pics!
Dave,
I'm fond of #2 content...I used to swim quite a bit and I always enjoy seeing technique of the younglings getting from the deck into the water! For that pic, it would have been cool to center the kids since their lineup makes a slanted visual line in your perspective which creates some interest.
#5 is very interesting - keep that up to find the framing that pleases your eye - you're definately onto something there - it makes me look forward to how you can express the action after the gun fires. The pic seems just a little cluttered and cut off and I can't see any good cropping.
Images are well exposed and you've captured the meet pretty well. Numbers
5 and 7 could be better composed. With 5, if you'd had the whole swimmer
(any of them) this would have worked better. With 7, the bright object in
the lower right detracts from the shot.
Ian
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Dave,
I'm fond of #2 content...I used to swim quite a bit and I always enjoy seeing technique of the younglings getting from the deck into the water! For that pic, it would have been cool to center the kids since their lineup makes a slanted visual line in your perspective which creates some interest.
#5 is very interesting - keep that up to find the framing that pleases your eye - you're definately onto something there - it makes me look forward to how you can express the action after the gun fires. The pic seems just a little cluttered and cut off and I can't see any good cropping.
Mike
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http://2H2OPhoto.smugmug.com
5 and 7 could be better composed. With 5, if you'd had the whole swimmer
(any of them) this would have worked better. With 7, the bright object in
the lower right detracts from the shot.
Ian
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