#65 Comments needed

snickerbell2snickerbell2 Registered Users Posts: 19 Big grins
edited May 25, 2006 in The Dgrin Challenges
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these were taken a couple of weeks ago, but i can go reshoot at any time... the bridge is an old abandoned Rail Road... and the building is an old Grist Mill. Openions please

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  • firedancing4lifefiredancing4life Registered Users Posts: 550 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2006
    The first one is a bit busy with the tree bracnhes.
    The second one could use some more contrast.
    I like the third one the most because of the contrasing red windows...it also feels the most nostalgic.
    Kevin
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  • Antonio CorreiaAntonio Correia Registered Users Posts: 6,241 Major grins
    edited May 18, 2006
    snickerbell2

    About the 1.st photo:
    1drink.gif Maybe it would be possible to go and take the picture a better day, not so cloudy.
    And you could also choose the time of the day.
    It is better in the morning or in the evening.
    Depends on the orientation of the scene/bridge.
    Maybe there is an hour when the sun is shinning softly on the bridge ...
    You could improve the composition making the shot not so 'busy' with trees...

    About the 2.st photo:
    1drink.gif For me it needs DOF and sharpness.
    I would reconsider the composition using the rule of the thirds too.
    The end of the road could/should be at the 1/3 up right.

    About the 3.ed photo:
    1drink.gif Step back.
    Choose a better day and a better hour.
    Use some branch to compose the picture.

    It is more difficult to criticize than to do it yourself ... So, if you ever see my pictures and you think they are not so good, you know why ... :):

    Please post the others photos you are going to take in this very thread for us to see. Thank you.

    Regards. thumb.gif
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  • robinsphotosrobinsphotos Registered Users Posts: 30 Big grins
    edited May 19, 2006
    Out of the three I like the thrid one the best.
  • sayntbrigidsayntbrigid Registered Users Posts: 381 Major grins
    edited May 20, 2006
    I LOVE number 3, mebbe you could clone out the road in the corner 1drink.gifclap
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  • twinbnjtwinbnj Registered Users Posts: 271 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2006
    #3 very nice shot - agree with cloning out the road.
  • swintonphotoswintonphoto Registered Users Posts: 1,664 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2006
    Ranked by composition - Favorite to least:
    #2
    #1
    #3

    The composition of #3 is just a bit too boring for me. I personally like #2 a lot.
    Jonathan
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  • erich6erich6 Registered Users Posts: 1,638 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2006
    swintonphoto wrote:
    Ranked by composition - Favorite to least:
    #2
    #1
    #3

    The composition of #3 is just a bit too boring for me. I personally like #2 a lot.

    15524779-Ti.gif I like #2 the best. Just need to work on contrast and if you have a RAW file try to compensate for the overexposure a bit.
  • mr peasmr peas Registered Users Posts: 1,369 Major grins
    edited May 25, 2006
    Any of the pictures will do I suppose. Its cool scenery, people like me who grew up in the far west cant really relate as far as huge bridges in mountain sides, but I'm sure theres a lot of people here that can. I would suggest submitting the 2nd one, I like that one the most. Play with the curves and give it a soft focus look if you can, oh and submit a much larger photo! good luck!
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