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*Challenge 24 - mercphoto landscapes

mercphotomercphoto Registered Users Posts: 4,550 Major grins
edited October 30, 2004 in The Dgrin Challenges
Within walking distance of where I work. Comments?

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    Ben:::DBen:::D Registered Users Posts: 76 Big grins
    edited October 29, 2004
    I think the top one is stronger, compositionally--more going on. Perhaps the sky could use a little darkening down--seems blown out. Might be just my taste, but I'd like to see a little more green in those trees. They look unnaturally "grey". Maybe that's just how they looked though ne_nau.gif

    Nice work!
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    snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited October 30, 2004
    mercphoto wrote:
    Within walking distance of where I work. Comments?

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    I think the top one is the more interesting composition. Looks like it's at a slight tilt though? Like Ben said, the sky could use some color. Would be perfect if there were some ducks in the water. Is that the ducks on the grass back there?
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