These are nice shots. That your model looks comfortable in front of the
camera helps a lot. They look a bit dark to me. The second would be cool
shot with a shallower DOF--just enough that you can still tell where you
are but not so much that it distracts from the model.
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I agree. A shallower DOF in that 2nd shot would be great. The model is very good and relaxed and these are nicely captured. I feel that your contrast is a little low in the first shot and the shot could be brightened up a bit with curves. The second shot is for my tastes a bit too contrasty and maybe oversharpened. I would try to get the contrast somewhere in between the 2 shots. You're off to a good start, just keep shooting!!!
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camera helps a lot. They look a bit dark to me. The second would be cool
shot with a shallower DOF--just enough that you can still tell where you
are but not so much that it distracts from the model.
This is a snapshot I took of my "Nephew" Noah sleeping in my mom's hands when he was 2 weeks.