Will this work?
Charbu
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Not sure about the crop on this one? I think it fit's the patch idea just fine. I thought about calling it, "A Patch of White". What do you thinK?
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Henri Cartier Bresson
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I sort of like not seeing all of the horse, but I agree that the composition could be improved. I'm at a bit of a loss on what to do to improve this shot though... maybe I see a little fuziness? What was your f-stop?
Hopefully someone else can be of more help than me, but I hereby offer my encouragement for an excellent concept!
Potential Title: Stressed Mr. Ed? Nay! It's a patch.
... come along.
Suggestion: a wider shot,
maybe looking over his left shoulder,
show full face with some of shoulder.
I think he makes a wonderful entry!
For expression: give him some peanut butter to eat?
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