*Challenge 25: Ben D: Is this funny?

Ben:::D

Hey everybody,

This challenge is actually CHALLENGING! I'm having a hard time trying to find funny material--at least that's current. Of course, I've got gobs of stuff of my little girl that's hilarious, but it's months old...

Anyway, give me some feedback on this. Humor? Or just weird? (I've got horizontal versions too, if it matters)

thanks!

miketaylor01

Its kinda funny. I mean it made me smile when I looked at it and figured out what it was that my mind was telling me was wrong. Im a little slow sometimes . Somehting that I think would be kilarious with this scene would be if you could get a friend and somehow put a face print on the wall at the height of his head and then like have him laying on the ground passed out. That would be very funny. Thats what I did with my shot. I just took a scene that I thought was already funny and then introduced a person into it to kind of add to how funny the scene itself is. Just a thought.

lynnesite

miketaylor01 wrote:

Its kinda funny. I mean it made me smile when I looked at it and figured out what it was that my mind was telling me was wrong. Im a little slow sometimes . Somehting that I think would be kilarious with this scene would be if you could get a friend and somehow put a face print on the wall at the height of his head and then like have him laying on the ground passed out. That would be very funny. Thats what I did with my shot. I just took a scene that I thought was already funny and then introduced a person into it to kind of add to how funny the scene itself is. Just a thought.

Like the Far Side cartoon that said "School for the Gifted" and "pull" on the door, and the kid with the books under his arm is pushing the door...

Or like the witch that's smashed into the building-decoration. Yeah. Something to make it more compelling.

Ben:::D

I agree. It's not that funny as is. GREAT ideas though! I appreciate it. I'll see what I can come up with.