Wide angle

Yuri PautovYuri Pautov Registered Users Posts: 1,918 Major grins
edited June 23, 2006 in People
Want to share with you this widw angle photo (Sony R1).
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I like this cloudy gray-blue sky on background...
Your critique,
Yuri

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  • ultravoxultravox Registered Users Posts: 776 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2006
    Yuri Pautov wrote:
    I like this cloudy gray-blue sky on background...
    Your critique,
    Yuri
    I like the dust trail, the jump moment...
    Short version: I like it.clap.gif
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  • LeDudeLeDude Registered Users Posts: 501 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2006
    i concur, nice shot

    you've got a hand in the lower left corner that could be chopped
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  • RichardRichard Administrators, Vanilla Admin Posts: 19,954 moderator
    edited June 23, 2006
    Yuri Pautov wrote:
    Want to share with you this widw angle photo (Sony R1).


    I like this cloudy gray-blue sky on background...
    Your critique,
    Yuri
    The red of the rider's jacket against the gray sky is very nice. I like the composition and the exposure looks just right. My only nit is that there seems to be a stray finger (or something) in the lower left that is a bit distracting. Not sure what to do about it, though. I think I would try cloning before cropping as the guy on the left is already slightly out of the frame. ne_nau.gif Other than that, I think it's a fine capture. thumb.gif

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  • erich6erich6 Registered Users Posts: 1,638 Major grins
    edited June 23, 2006
    I like the colors, exposure, and the action moment you got. However, I would crop from the left all the way up to the first of the three trees in the background and up from the bottom to below the left post holding the jump bar. That would put more emphasis on the sky and place the horse on the left side of the frame making it more of a dynamic composition. You don't lose much since I don't think the spectators on the left are adding to the photo.

    Erich
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