Devil Sticks sunset

livefreenski

what you think? any obvious problems?

Giselle

very cool

deeya

I love it.... Not sure it's a problem really.. but if I was going to play with it at all... I might look at the crop to cut out the bit of water showing on the lower right side.. and then maybe a bit of the bottom to make the ground he is sitting on take up no more than 1/3 of the shot..

And if you wanted to go even tighter... you could make a great vertical out of this.. but you would lose the sun..

But.. I'm still so new to this.. what do I know??

Outstanding job with the silhouette... just perfect! Do you have any others from this shoot??

livefreenski

why yes i do... #2
#3

DavidS

I love them. I agree with Denise about cropping the water in the first shot. Very minor though.

livefreenski

DavidS wrote:

I love them. I agree with Denise about cropping the water in the first shot. Very minor though.

something like this...

livefreenski

With a day reflections i defiently like this better its balance is improved

deeya

livefreenski wrote:

With a day reflections i defiently like this better its balance is improved

I agree... it's really a great shot... worthy of framing...

As for the 3rd one (2nd one is showing a white box red x for me).. I don't care for it as much as the 1st ....and again I think it needs cropping.. the person (?) standing on the right .. you really can't tell what it is so it's distracting to me.... I'd also cut out most of the sky ... try using the rule of thirds and have the stream/ground take up 2/3rds of the height of the photo.. that will leave all the beautiful colors from the sunset...

livefreenski

i will try that and repost thanks

livefreenski