I need you C&C on this one...

DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
edited July 19, 2006 in Holy Macro
...cause when I first looked at it I thought it was too centered, but the more I stare at it the more I like it...

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  • retroretro Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    Dalantech wrote:
    ...cause when I first looked at it I thought it was too centered, but the more I stare at it the more I like it...

    The composition is ok i think, nice image. thumb.gif
    But why not try the crop tool just once, who knows, you might even like it!?! :D:D
  • bigpixbigpix Registered Users Posts: 371 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    great capture and colours...... have you tried cropping a little off behind the butterfly say through the purple flower, as this will give better balance to your shotthumb.gif
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  • SkippySkippy Registered Users Posts: 12,075 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    Dalantech wrote:
    ...cause when I first looked at it I thought it was too centered, but the more I stare at it the more I like it...

    Looks okay to me thumb.gif .... now when your finished with this little fellow send him over to my place if you wouldn't mind :D

    Lovely shot Dalantech.... aint fair you guys get all the good butterflies.
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  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    retro wrote:
    The composition is ok i think, nice image. <img src="https://us.v-cdn.net/6029383/emoji/thumb.gif&quot; border="0" alt="" >
    But why not try the crop tool just once, who knows, you might even like it!?! :D:D
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  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    bigpix wrote:
    great capture and colours...... have you tried cropping a little off behind the butterfly say through the purple flower, as this will give better balance to your shotthumb.gif

    Nope -the viewfinder is my only crop. I was concerned that the image is too centered and that there is too much dead space behind the butterfly -and after 2 posts recommending a crop it's pretty much confirmed.

    It's been a while since I've shot butterflies, so my composition was a little off. More practice...
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  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    Skippy wrote:
    Looks okay to me thumb.gif .... now when your finished with this little fellow send him over to my place if you wouldn't mind :D

    Lovely shot Dalantech.... aint fair you guys get all the good butterflies.
    ....... Skippy (Australia)

    *Dal wonders if the butterfly would survive being mailed to Australia if there were sufficient air holes in the envelope* :D
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  • retroretro Registered Users Posts: 303 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    Dalantech wrote:
    Nope -the viewfinder is my only crop. I was concerned that the image is too centered and that there is too much dead space behind the butterfly -and after 2 posts recommending a crop it's pretty much confirmed.
    Hey, I didnt recommend a crop on this pic, I just meant in general. I just find it a bit amusing that you hate the crop tool so much. :D That said you have a great eye for composition so you might do fine without it..:):
  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    retro wrote:
    Hey, I didnt recommend a crop on this pic, I just meant in general. I just find it a bit amusing that you hate the crop tool so much. :D That said you have a great eye for composition so you might do fine without it..:):

    Thanks :):

    It's not that I hate the crop tool -I just don't want to get lax when composing with the camera and find myself dependent on it... :uhoh
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  • boogieboogie Registered Users Posts: 553 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    I think your in camera crop is a little to tight and centered. The empty space on the right bothers me a tiny, tiny, bit. Other than that it's composed nicely.

    A little crop now and then won't break the camera or computer...don't be so hard on yourself Dalantech we'll still enjoy your macros whether you crop or not.... We all do it to some degree. iloveyou.gif

    Keep up the good work! clap.gif
  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    boogie wrote:
    I think your in camera crop is a little to tight and centered. The empty space on the right bothers me a tiny, tiny, bit. Other than that it's composed nicely.

    A little crop now and then won't break the camera or computer...don't be so hard on yourself Dalantech we'll still enjoy your macros whether you crop or not.... We all do it to some degree. iloveyou.gif

    Keep up the good work! clap.gif

    Thanks! :):
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited July 18, 2006
    hmmmmmmmm everything is fine but as you asked i think green on colorful wing is not finene_nau.gif
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  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2006
    hmmmmmmmm everything is fine but as you asked i think green on colorful wing is not finene_nau.gif

    Thanks Awais! :):
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  • Lord VetinariLord Vetinari Registered Users Posts: 15,901 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2006
    Wonderful pic whatever crop you do or don't do on it. Do agree with the others it would have been even better with the butterfly a bit lower and to the left. I often get totally stuck with some bug shots especially high mag ones where I'm torn between composition and Identification requirements and often end up somewhere in between satisfying neither :)
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  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited July 19, 2006
    Wonderful pic whatever crop you do or don't do on it. Do agree with the others it would have been even better with the butterfly a bit lower and to the left. I often get totally stuck with some bug shots especially high mag ones where I'm torn between composition and Identification requirements and often end up somewhere in between satisfying neither :)
    Brian V

    Thanks for the feedback Brian! Sometimes I get so caught up waching them that I forget I've got a camera in my hand... 11doh.gif
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