*Challenge 26 - Nir's 2nd try, and 3rd, 4th ...

Nir

This was my first try; 18th Century, Italy



Shakey helped me understand this wasn't exactly suitable for "in my house".


Then I tried My Favorite Corner;



But it is lacking a special angle to make it unique. This is my widest lens Mike, and I have difficulty here with angles because it is on the edge of the staircase going down to the basement.


This 'morning ritual' came to mind; Sugar, Milk and the Morning Paper;



But I'm not extremely happy with it either.


Also tried for geometry in Staircase;




Finally got the next which really hits the nail on the head in my perception of my household - TEAMWORK and I Get To Clean Up Afterwards;



But does it 'speak' to anyone out there?

I would really appreciate more of your comments and help in making the 'critical' choice :dunno

ginger_55

Yes, Nir, I really like it, shows the living going on, and somehow the whole thing works, IMO, as a composition. Too bad there isn't something in hebrew on the wall, I think that stuff is so cool. Interesting shot of your paper, but for "knowing you" I would go with the people and the kitchen. (It is a gamble)

ginger

mgound

Beautiful Family!

lynnma

Nir the family shot speaks to me I really like it a lot
Nir I just looked at it again and I'm not sure it's level... and no I'm not joking... seems it may just tilt a tad and now I can't see it I can't remember which way...


to the left??

aero-nut

I love the family shot! That really seems to capture the "household" activites.

Nir

Thanks guys for all your comments!! This IS what my house 'feels' like!
Lynn, level or not, makeup or not ( ), this one is "no photoshop".

miketaylor01

I like the family shot the best. You were able to portray your family very well.