Grass, barbed wire and sunset

NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
edited August 24, 2006 in Landscapes
Tonight I tried the same spot as yesterday, but slightly changed the subjects:

Self-portrait in grass:

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Sunset grass:

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Two types of barbs:

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Barbed fence:

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Tall grass at sunset:

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The rest is here: http://nik.smugmug.com/gallery/1790165
"May the f/stop be with you!"

Comments

  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2006
    I really like to two types of barbs pic
    Nice clarity. I like how the fence barbs are out of focus. Great shots.
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2006
    Swartzy,
    Swartzy wrote:
    Nice clarity. I like how the fence barbs are out of focus. Great shots.

    Thanks for looking! thumb.gif
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited August 19, 2006
    I love the concept and composition of the 3rd shot but the grass seems to suffer from being just a touch on the soft side of focus. Also, the twig sticking off horizontally to the the left edge is begging to be cloned out as it really disrupts the eyes movement along the barbed wire and out into the distance.

    The 4th shot is very nice but not as intersting as the composition of the 3rd shot.
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2006
    I agree :-)
    truth wrote:
    I love the concept and composition of the 3rd shot but the grass seems to suffer from being just a touch on the soft side of focus. Also, the twig sticking off horizontally to the the left edge is begging to be cloned out as it really disrupts the eyes movement along the barbed wire and out into the distance.

    The 4th shot is very nice but not as intersting as the composition of the 3rd shot.
    Appreciate your comment! thumb.gif
    I'm sure I'll be there again some time soon, I'll try to reshoot...
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
  • saurorasaurora Registered Users Posts: 4,320 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2006
    I, too, like the concept of the 3rd shot, but I know you can do better, Nik! I really like the 4th shot. The barbed wire against the soft muted layers of hills and light really works well for me. Looks like a neat area to shoot in.
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited August 19, 2006
    Saurora,
    saurora wrote:
    I, too, like the concept of the 3rd shot, but I know you can do better, Nik! I really like the 4th shot. The barbed wire against the soft muted layers of hills and light really works well for me. Looks like a neat area to shoot in.

    Thanks, I appreciate the confidence! iloveyou.gif
    We'll see soon, if I'm good enough for what you're thinking of me rolleyes1.gif
    Cheers! 1drink.gif
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
  • CantfeelmyfingersCantfeelmyfingers Registered Users Posts: 531 Major grins
    edited August 24, 2006
    i really like the third one..
    "Take my picture, Tonight I feel beautiful..."
    -Marilyn Monroe
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited August 24, 2006
    Thanks!
    i really like the third one..
    I'm gonna work on it more within next few days.
    Stay tuned:-)!
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
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