Brothers

Maelyn

These are my oldest two (the only ones really willing to put up with mom's photography habit :rofl)

Anyway I've been working through some of Yuri's advice and Chuck Gardners advice on posing people. I know these are probably pretty classic poses but was looking for some feedback.

Maelyn

Another one

Maelyn

and one last one...

Scott_Quier

The first one:

• Setting looks very nice and muting the light on it allowed you to focus attention on the subject. Very nice.
• Exposure is very nicely done.
• The pose looks good too; a slightly "funny" tilt to his head and the hand at the ankle looks a little forced.

No comments on the second.

The third

• You have reduced the focus on the children by making them such an insignificant portion of photo.
• You could have moved the camera position to allow the childern to occupy one of the "rules of thirds" positions and still kept some of the waterfall in the background.
• You have the waterfall growing out the top of one of the children's head - very distracting.
• Again, exposure is nicely done. With such a small image, though, it's hard to get a feel for the quality of the light used.

Maelyn

Thanks Scott! Any thoughts on how to reposition the head in the first shot? Down, up etc?