Portrait: Dancing in the Dark

flyingdutchie

Comments and Critiques welcome.

Dancing in the Dark

(This is a picture of my girlfriend dancing on a blues-cruise)

Thanks!
-- Anton.

thegreenegg

I love the conversion. It has a nice glow to it, but I don't like what you captured so much.
She looks like she is having fun but I can't see her face. I want to see her face. It's would be a really good shot if she hadn't 'let her hair down'.
Keep it up.
Ashley

flyingdutchie

thegreenegg wrote:

I love the conversion. It has a nice glow to it, but I don't like what you captured so much.
She looks like she is having fun but I can't see her face. I want to see her face. It's would be a really good shot if she hadn't 'let her hair down'.
Keep it up.
Ashley

Thanks Ashley,

She was dancing and i saw her hair swinging back and forth. I waited until her hair covered her face, to make it a really dark picture.... So, the hair was deliberate. The 'portrait' was not so much about the face, but about the forms that the light patches of skin show, about movement.