My second post - any criticism?

wetxlipswetxlips Registered Users Posts: 3 Beginner grinner
edited September 2, 2006 in Wildlife
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  • DalantechDalantech Registered Users Posts: 1,519 Major grins
    edited September 2, 2006
    My biggest criticism -this is only your second post... slacker! :D

    I like the first and third image -in the rest the subject is too centered or there are foreground elements that are very distracting.
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  • photodougphotodoug Registered Users Posts: 870 Major grins
    edited September 2, 2006
    I agree that they're all on the right track...but too many elements and/or comp seems offset. My eye isn't drawn to the right place...but then again I've got lazy eyes.

    What kind of post actions did you apply to these shots?

    Nice job! thumb.gif
  • saurorasaurora Registered Users Posts: 4,320 Major grins
    edited September 2, 2006
    I like #1 and #3 as well. The first one best for the composition and the pleasing bokeh. The last one in particular, just has too much going on and my eyes flit back and forth trying to land on something. You're off to a great start however! Welcome to Dgrin! thumb.gif
  • Dick on ArubaDick on Aruba Registered Users Posts: 3,484 Major grins
    edited September 2, 2006
    Most thing are said already but I still wonder if the fly in the 2nd pic making a head stand?

    Thanks for sharing.

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