Model Rael (just one pic)

binghott

i posted pics from this series a while ago, but just finished this picture yesterday and i wanted to know what you think about it.



thanks for looking

windoze

she is a beautiful girl, but there is something about her posture in this image that maybe doesnt look right..... Maybe its only my perception.
and i dont know why the lock? Heck let me shut up - shes a beautiful girl and if i could take a pic like that id be very happy ( and probably divorced )!
troy

Owen

I agree. She's sticking her head out and her shoulders back, and her one arm looks glued to the fence. Something about her pose is just wrong.

Owen

bfjr

I just wanna give her a good back massage :wow

binghott

Owen wrote:

I agree. She's sticking her head out and her shoulders back, and her one arm looks glued to the fence. Something about her pose is just wrong.

Owen

thanks owen, that's the response i was looking for. i thought it looked awkward, but thought it might be acceptable.

i forgot to mention that rael is my girlfriend! she was my first model and now we're dating.

here's our favorite of the shoot, what do you think of this one:

mkress65

She is a lovely young woman and I think that this pose looks a lot more natural than the last. With that said, I think the clutter in the background is distracting, I find my eye drawn toward the reflection/ specular light on her necklace and the white of her bra strap next to the strap of her top. But I like the look on her face and the catch light in her eyes and the crop of the photo.

Scott_Quier

Owen wrote:

I agree. She's sticking her head out and her shoulders back, and her one arm looks glued to the fence. Something about her pose is just wrong.

Owen

And her hips are severly tilted forward. A real candidate for the chiropractor's table! But, nice looking young lady and the technical merits of the photo are beyond great.

Shay Stephens

I think it looks good. Just a tip, have the model use her free hand to hold the post, or her belt, or something other than just hanging. Give the hands a job and they generally look more relaxed and natural. But it looks good!

binghott wrote:

i posted pics from this series a while ago, but just finished this picture yesterday and i wanted to know what you think about it.



thanks for looking

binghott

mkress65 wrote:

She is a lovely young woman and I think that this pose looks a lot more natural than the last. With that said, I think the clutter in the background is distracting, I find my eye drawn toward the reflection/ specular light on her necklace and the white of her bra strap next to the strap of her top. But I like the look on her face and the catch light in her eyes and the crop of the photo.

thanks for looking everyone, i really appreciate the comments and would love more if you have them.