Please judge

Dupont24Dupont24 Registered Users Posts: 237 Major grins
edited October 5, 2006 in Wildlife
Please judge
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  • tleetlee Registered Users Posts: 1,090 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    O.K. , no one has replied. I am new here, so I'll give it a try.

    I generally like this image. It could be a little bit more in focus , and the subject may be just a bit too centered. I like the lighting, background, and the dog is very cute.

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  • jwearjwear Registered Users Posts: 8,013 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    yep i agree and the pink in the background 1/2 i do not like
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    Nice shot
    i think better focus and background :D
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  • LCDLCD Registered Users Posts: 494 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    the focus on the eyes is not bad, maybe just a little more DOF to have the nose in focus too. The bg is nicely blurred.
    You caught a really cute expression and the pink would make a nice bright contrasting bg. But would work better if the entire bg was plain pink - for me.
    Cute model, and you seem to get the best out of him. maybe he/she'll sit for you again.
  • Shay StephensShay Stephens Registered Users Posts: 3,165 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    Dupont24 wrote:
    Please judge

    For me it is both good and bad. I like the focus on the eyes and the moment of intensity that looks to be there. Where is fails for me is the composition. It is centered without a compelling reason for the centering. If you had composed (or possibly cropped) the frame to have a little more room on the side the dog is looking at, it would have a little more context and work better for the viewer (me).
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  • Dupont24Dupont24 Registered Users Posts: 237 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    Thank you everybody for the help. I will work on your suggestions. Thanks again.clap.gif
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  • Dick on ArubaDick on Aruba Registered Users Posts: 3,484 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    High cuteness-level, beautiful dog. I would try to eliminatie or alter the backgroung in less disturbing contrasts.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  • dbaker1221dbaker1221 Registered Users Posts: 4,482 Major grins
    edited October 5, 2006
    I think it cute as hell.:D
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