One more from Union Square

obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
edited December 22, 2004 in Landscapes
Sorry for another thread, but this photo was very well recieved elsewhere.

DSC_8094.jpg

Please let me know the good and the bad of this image.

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  • ubergeekubergeek Registered Users Posts: 99 Big grins
    edited December 17, 2004
    Nice!
    I like it. The repeating geometric patterns and the odd angle of the building make it somehow compelling. Is this a composite, or a single image?

    Cheers,
    Jeremy

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  • obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 19, 2004
    ubergeek wrote:
    I like it. The repeating geometric patterns and the odd angle of the building make it somehow compelling. Is this a composite, or a single image?

    Cheers,
    Jeremy
    Thanks Jeremy, it is a single image.
  • NirNir Registered Users Posts: 1,400 Major grins
    edited December 20, 2004
    Very interesting shot! I like it!

    Perhaps exposing for the shadows on the left and bringing out more details from the building could improve it.
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  • obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 20, 2004
    Nir wrote:
    Very interesting shot! I like it!

    Perhaps exposing for the shadows on the left and bringing out more details from the building could improve it.
    Some thing like this?

    fmDec.jpg

    Thanks for your comments.
  • dkappdkapp Registered Users Posts: 985 Major grins
    edited December 20, 2004
    obelix wrote:
    Some thing like this?

    fmDec.jpg

    Thanks for your comments.

    This looks great. What did you do different?

    Dave
  • obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2004
    dkapp wrote:
    This looks great. What did you do different?

    Dave
    - Adjusted exposure to +0.7 EV
    - Raised shadows and highlights (not sure about midtones)

    Very interesting shot to play with.
  • BryanBryan Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited December 21, 2004
    The one thing that kind of grabbed me was that the angle was odd. I don't know how to explaine it so I played with your picture a little. I hope you do not mind.

    Here is the original, see the red line points out the odd angle, I like it, but it just was off from the 30, 45, 60, 90 of my geometric mind...

    13018989-M.jpg

    So I rotated the picture a bit and then had to crop it to fill the frame...

    I do not know if it is any better, makes the building fell like it is falling into the picture more, which is not a warm fuzzy feeling.

    13018990-M.jpg

    Interesting to play with, you have a great shot! so many ways to tweek it, I would love to live there and have a chance to shoot it many different ways, the new and old archicture, lines and angles, great material to work with.

    Thanks for the showing us!
  • obelixobelix Registered Users Posts: 165 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2004
    Very interesting take on it Bryan, I liked what you did.

    Yeah, San Francisco is a wonderful place :)
  • dkappdkapp Registered Users Posts: 985 Major grins
    edited December 22, 2004
    When I first saw this photo, it looked like lattice work, not another building :D

    It took a little while before I figured out that it was actually another building w/ the sky reflection in the window.

    Dave
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