new model -- risque photos (no nudity)

cdhames

Photos of a new model at her second shoot. I worked with her the first time and between the two shoots the level of confidence and movement was like night and day. please critique!

gluwater

I like the 2nd and last the best for the comp. But the last shot her skin tones are different than the first three and I'd like her head to be tilted a little more to see more of her face.

Edit:
Just looked at your gallery of her and this shot has different skin tones and lighting that I think make it a very unflattering shot compared to the rest. Good work on the shoot

SteveM

Very nice, although the angle of the first two shots exaggerates her long nose and aren't as flattering as #3 and #4. #2 isn't bad, but with #1 it's pretty pronounced. Also the crop on #4 kind of bothers me where her foot is chopped off. Either a little tigher to crop the entire thing or looser to include the rest of the foot. My eyes start at her eyes, and follow down her form, and then kinda get hacked off at the end. Beatiful girl and work though!

cdhames

thanks guys. yeah I had to play with the skintone a bit on some of the images. a few good shots but the exposures were a little off, so her skin came out darker. I had her moving back and forth on that bed while shooting with only two lights. I'll work on trying to adjust the tone a little more.

JimM

Some really nice work here! I wish I could offer some suggestions, but I think they look really good!

Thanks for sharing!

Photosbychuck

Hi, cdhames
I like #2 & #3 the best they look like natural poses. She is very pretty and the quality & lighting of the shots is very good. What is her contact information?

Take Care,
Charles Cassidy,
Cassidy's Photography,
http://www.modellocate.com/action/goto/uid=4447

JimM

Did these just disappear?

Halliday

Gone for me

tomthephotographer

Hey where did they go??