Soup (yes, that's what she call herself)
Hi there
I've never shot in a studio properly before, and last weekend, I went to this one workshop that teaches me how to use multiple flashguns to take photos a-la studio shots.
Many pointed out my composition and framing needs to be reworked, but the thing is, they didn't tell me how can I improve - as in, how and what should I be looking for.
Take a look and do tell me what you guys think and which part can I improve. Many thanks! (comments can be made here or flickr. Either way works )
Edit : I've found some links on the sticky above. Reading them!
I've never shot in a studio properly before, and last weekend, I went to this one workshop that teaches me how to use multiple flashguns to take photos a-la studio shots.
Many pointed out my composition and framing needs to be reworked, but the thing is, they didn't tell me how can I improve - as in, how and what should I be looking for.
Take a look and do tell me what you guys think and which part can I improve. Many thanks! (comments can be made here or flickr. Either way works )
Edit : I've found some links on the sticky above. Reading them!
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- is very good (IMO), but I would not have cropped her head so drastically. The look reminds me of what people look like when they are wearing a motorcycle helmet.
- Posing - maybe to much weight on her arms, pushes her shoulders up into her face too much.
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The second one is nice, but a bit boring to me. The third has too harsh shadows.
Sorry I can't give you more feedback, but for your first try, I would think these are good!
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