Light through a window

Lawrence

I would like some feedback on this one please. Thanks........Lawrence

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garfonzo

I find it hard to concentrate on the picture with that white border. Maybe try without the border?



However, the pic is neat but perhaps a little too cluttere IMO. There are too many items in the shot. Maybe if the depth of feild was a little tighter and you focused more on, say, the lantern, or the window and the other items were somewhat blurred, it would give the shot a focus.

Cheers

Skippy

Lawrence wrote:

I would like some feedback on this one please. Thanks........Lawrence


Hi Lawrence, the picture itself looks fine, but the boarder bothers me.
The contents of the picture are very interesting, I'd like to see it without such a large glowing frame around it, it is a nice shot other than the boarder .........thanks for sharing ........ Skippy (Australia)

Awais Yaqub

I like the image inside the frame i think frame is not appropriate
Or may be you are trying to give old feel. I some time see on old photos but it is oval

TooManyToys

Lawrence wrote:

I would like some feedback on this one please. Thanks........Lawrence

I see where you are going with this one and I have to agree with other comments.... a little too much to focus on...although I don't mind the white border, it just needs a little more fading to give it a more dream-like quality.

Perhaps if the photo was framed a little differently...get rid of the distracting elements at the bottom of the photo and don't cut off the top of the window frame. Keep some of the stonework at the top to fade out to white.

I hope you don't mind but here's sort of what I'm getting at with some quick and dirty photshop action to give a representation of what I'm trying to say..

Lawrence

TooManyToys wrote:

Lawrence wrote:

I would like some feedback on this one please. Thanks........Lawrence

I see where you are going with this one and I have to agree with other comments.... a little too much to focus on...although I don't mind the white border, it just needs a little more fading to give it a more dream-like quality.

Perhaps if the photo was framed a little differently...get rid of the distracting elements at the bottom of the photo and don't cut off the top of the window frame. Keep some of the stonework at the top to fade out to white.

I hope you don't mind but here's sort of what I'm getting at with some quick and dirty photshop action to give a representation of what I'm trying to say..

Thanks for all the cc. I see what you mean by the tighter crop. I think it is better

Lawrence