50 views and not a single comment? All im looking for is suggestions on this type of photography?
50 views without a comment is not so odd.
i like the picture overall, seems pretty sharp, particularly her eyes, but i could give you a couple criticisms. the neck is much brighter than the face, which doesn't look good imo. i think some more contrast would be good.
The skin blurring technique you used looks poorly done - her drawn on eyelashes loose sharpness and her skin appears to be out of focus, which is confusing because the DOF would indicate it SHOULD be in focus considering her hair is naturally out of focus.. I do like the whimsicale catchlight in her eye and the rhinestones - but again, you blurred them unnaturally.
I like it, but the lighting is off a bit. But since I don't do studio lighting, I can make any suggestions other than moving it up and a bit further away. I'm thinking it's a bit too close for what I would expect from her outfit/makeup.
Great capture of her eyes! And the skin tones look good to me....
I might frame it a bit closer on the bottom, though!
The top half of this photo is wonderful in my opinion. Just the light and expression that personify a doll. However, I think it is ruined by the bottom half- it is too dark and doesn't go with the rest of the image.
In my opinion I think it would work better as a vertical crop from the top of her head to no further down than the pink ribbon on her dress. Try it and see.
Nice job and don't get discouraged by lack of posts I find it hard to know what to say about a picture a lot of the time.
I think your first one had almost perfect lighting on the face it was a tad off- maybe too much of a shadow line. I think it should have been more uniform maybe even lights on both sides of her face.
I'd like to see more, keep it up.
Happy Halloween,
Ashley
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50 views without a comment is not so odd.
i like the picture overall, seems pretty sharp, particularly her eyes, but i could give you a couple criticisms. the neck is much brighter than the face, which doesn't look good imo. i think some more contrast would be good.
what kind of suggestions do you want?
Great capture of her eyes! And the skin tones look good to me....
I might frame it a bit closer on the bottom, though!
For a first time, this is really nice!
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In my opinion I think it would work better as a vertical crop from the top of her head to no further down than the pink ribbon on her dress. Try it and see.
Nice job and don't get discouraged by lack of posts I find it hard to know what to say about a picture a lot of the time.
I think your first one had almost perfect lighting on the face it was a tad off- maybe too much of a shadow line. I think it should have been more uniform maybe even lights on both sides of her face.
I'd like to see more, keep it up.
Happy Halloween,
Ashley
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