Challenge 77

Brett

Here are three ideas I came up with. Please give me some comments on these.

Light System


Speaker/Stereo System


Security System

Manfr3d

Sound System is a cool idea, as is surveillance system.
But I think you need more of sound system / surveillance
system in the pictures to make'em say system out loud.

Flyinggina

I like the minimalist style (and stylishness) and the lighting of your photographs a lot. However, the light picture doesn't say system at all to me. For the challenge, I agree with Manfr3d's comments. The sound system and security system ideas are really great. However, for me, one speaker does not a system make. And I thought that the picture of the security equipment was simply a photo of a lamp on a wall. Even if I had understood it, one piece of equipment doesn't represent a system to me. You have some excellent ideas for this challenge, which is going to be really hard. Good luck!!

Virginia

anwmn1

I like the ideas, especially since I had the sound system as an idea as well. I agree with Virginia and Manfr3d. Though the speaker is a great shot, one speaker does not represent a system.

This is going to be an interesting challenge!

Aaron

twinbnj

I like the style of your shots. Need a bit more to convey the stero system.

imagin'

Brett wrote:

Here are three ideas I came up with. Please give me some comments on these.
Light System
Speaker/Stereo System
Security System

I can see some system in your 'light system', that is, in the way you cropped the image. all 3 images make me think "thing" or something like that. the systems you think of are very interesting, good luck!

rosselliot

second one for sure. it's the most interesting, the others are really unassuming. wouldn't recommend using them.

- RE

nalvarez

All three are rather bland pics, but they do seem to hit the theme. I would reshoot which ever one you decide on

Brett

nalvarez wrote:

All three are rather bland pics, but they do seem to hit the theme. I would reshoot which ever one you decide on

Bland? I prefer simplistic. It's a style like a single tree on a hilltop.

Richard

Brett wrote:

Bland? I prefer simplistic. It's a style like a single tree on a hilltop.

I like them. Perhaps it's a bit of a stretch to call them systems, but the important thing is to end up with a good image.

Cheers,