Rachel

PhotosbychuckPhotosbychuck Registered Users Posts: 1,239 Major grins
edited November 8, 2006 in People
All C & C welcome

Thanks,
Charles Cassidy,
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  • rosselliotrosselliot Registered Users Posts: 702 Major grins
    edited November 5, 2006
    there's just not that much spectacular about this photo. she's centered in the frame of a square photo. she looks washed out, and nothing is truly in focus. I'd have preferred a closer crop and at least most of her in focus. try, off-center, tilted head, looking down, or pointing nose down and looking up at you or something like that. you can take these "look into the camera" shots, but try a TON of other poses too.

    - RE

    btw, it's not like it's terrible, those are jmust my opinions!
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  • fcorin13fcorin13 Registered Users Posts: 130 Major grins
    edited November 6, 2006
    My advice? Crop it a lot closer around her head. SHe gets a little lost in the background. Maybe a B&W version? I like this portrait, but think it needs alittle something to make it stand out. Otherwise, it's just a typical portrait.
  • thdizzythdizzy Registered Users Posts: 262 Major grins
    edited November 7, 2006
    gefillmore wrote:

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    Little over-processed (noise, hue, etc) but definitely an improvement in the right direction.
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  • thdizzythdizzy Registered Users Posts: 262 Major grins
    edited November 8, 2006
    gefillmore wrote:
    sorry-no mona lisa by me from a 140kb pic-

    I stand corrected :D
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  • judahjudah Registered Users Posts: 253 Major grins
    edited November 8, 2006
    gefillmore wrote:
    hey chuck-

    hope you don't mind me working on this-

    if you do, I'll take it down-

    btw, pretty lady-

    108744077-L.jpg

    Wow! I must have my LCD out of calibration! :D
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    That saved a wretch like me!
    I once was lost, but now am found;
    Was blind, but now I see.

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