the first picture is ok, the sideways angle like that isn't my favorite, but i see what you were going for.
photo quality-wise, the 2nd picture looks like it's taken out of maxim, great skin, very nice work, but i think her head is too tiltled.
i think sepia is tacky, so i'm trying to ignore the third shot.
in the forth picture i don't like how her head is chopped off and her left (our right) breast appears to have a crease in it from her bathing suit, and i don't find that attractive. i also don't like the wall behind her.
overall, i like your work and see some great potential. i'd love to see more of you work!
I agree these are all good shots and could be great. I like the first one conceptually, but the lips seem sharper than the eyes. If it is supposed to be soft focus then blur the lips. If the DOF is where the blur is coming into play, the eyes have to the sharpest poin on her face.
#2 - I agree with too much tilt and the cropped head, but it also seems her right hip juts out too much. She almost looks scrunched into the frame shape as if inside a box.
#3 I like the sepia but the face seems blown out compared to the rest of the image.
I too would like to see more. Great ideas.
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photo quality-wise, the 2nd picture looks like it's taken out of maxim, great skin,
i think sepia is tacky, so i'm trying to ignore the third shot.
in the forth picture i don't like how her head is chopped off and her left (our right) breast appears to have a crease in it from her bathing suit, and i don't find that attractive. i also don't like the wall behind her.
overall, i like your work and see some great potential. i'd love to see more of you work!
I agree! Great stuff!!!
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#2 - I agree with too much tilt and the cropped head, but it also seems her right hip juts out too much. She almost looks scrunched into the frame shape as if inside a box.
#3 I like the sepia but the face seems blown out compared to the rest of the image.
I too would like to see more. Great ideas.
-Fleetwood Mac