77 Terminal System any thoughts?

MTN-Freerider

This one made me feel like I was back in college running around with a K1000 and a rool of 400tx.

I was using a 50mm lens, manual focus.


I was using a desk lamp and a white piece of paper. I may just do a re-shoot, but the transition from chemical process to photochop can be a touch one, I think it may need a little tweeking.

Anyway tell me which one you like. Maybe give a little advice.




The comp on these ones are pretty much the same kjust little difference in focus, editing, etc.





Comp is actually a little different on this one, look closely.




Any questions, comments, suggestions?

nalvarez

I like the second from top the best, but the box color seems to be lost with the background white color. Perhaps this can be adjusted. Good work!

Richard

I think the first shot is the strongest. If you can reshoot, I would try to also have the trigger in focus.

Cheers,