nice lighting and all, but I reallyl don't like the angle - it feels like I'm looking up her nostril. Also, it seems that her cleavage is sharper than her eyes and nose (but maybe that's what you guys want )
I also mind the wirstband, and the strand of hair on her mouth.
Somehow, the crop and the angle doesn't work for me. I think it might work better of she would be looking striaght down into the camera. She seems to heave wonderful eyes and an intense look.
But what bothers me most is the lightning. I think it is kind of flat.
I would like to see a little more detail in her hair for example.
Don't like the angle of this picture, cuts off her right arm. The white shirt and the white background is too much. I think a red shirt an red lipstick would look better - it would bring out the DUCATI.
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Also, considering it's a Ducati (work of art), I'd like to see more of the bike; especially because it's the bikes that will sell the clothing.
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just my $0.02
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Somehow, the crop and the angle doesn't work for me. I think it might work better of she would be looking striaght down into the camera. She seems to heave wonderful eyes and an intense look.
But what bothers me most is the lightning. I think it is kind of flat.
I would like to see a little more detail in her hair for example.
Otherwise the picture looks good...