Looks a bit hot, especially on her white clothes & the whites of her eyes.
Did you dodge the eyes out? Looks fake.
Yes, I did dodge the eyes a bit. You don't like the effect? I'm not sure what you mean by 'a bit hot'. There aren't any blown highlights, and the scarf actually looks like the correct color as it was.
I think you have composed this well and captured a great expression, but bright as others have said and her lips need more color definition...they look dry.
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Did you dodge the eyes out? Looks fake.
Yes, I did dodge the eyes a bit. You don't like the effect? I'm not sure what you mean by 'a bit hot'. There aren't any blown highlights, and the scarf actually looks like the correct color as it was.
Thanks for your comments.
I find the image to be too bright. Overall. The eyes just push it over board.
I read up to 253,252, 254 in her left eye - whiter than needed.
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Glad you took our comments in a positive manner.
She is a pretty girl and deserves to be seen in her best light, that's for sure.
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