Elegant Silhouette

Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
edited November 21, 2006 in The Dgrin Challenges
I was sitting on my terrace in the end of the the day i got this hand held
i can try try it again. as these are mine :dunno
Sky in background it was my 1st try others were not cool.
i hope it is Silhouette i metered the sky ,and yeah i used Polarisor

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1/60
f 3.5
iso 80
Sony H5
18mm

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  • Antonio CorreiaAntonio Correia Registered Users Posts: 6,241 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2006
    I like it Awais !
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    The blue sky is nice and so is the conposition.
    Go ahead with it !
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  • SloYerRollSloYerRoll Registered Users Posts: 2,788 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2006
    Very creative shot Awais. I like it allot!

    I don't really feel silhouette when I look at this shot though.

    Just my .02
  • photogmommaphotogmomma Registered Users Posts: 1,644 Major grins
    edited November 19, 2006
    Really cool shot! I think you may want to try cropping closer to only including the hinge and small section of the glass to capture the feel of "sihouette" more.

    Great photo!
  • nalvareznalvarez Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2006
    Very nice and clean shot - very original!
  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2006
    Awais
    There are parts I am having trouble with....

    1) The glass is transparent and larger than the frame/arms therefore takes away from the sillouette effect since the entire sky is blue

    2) Because less than one half of the eye glasses are included in the shot, as a viewer, it didn't convey the "theme" to me as I had to really study the shot. Initial viewing was the sense of an "abstract".

    3) This is an interesting shot but I know your eye and talent and believe you can do much better. This is my honest opinion as I respect your photographic ability.
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  • JenGraceJenGrace Registered Users Posts: 1,229 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2006
    Interesting idea. The lens distracts me from the theme of the picture. I think a picture of just frames are part of the frame would convey the message better. :):
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2006
    Thanks everyone i will try again :D
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  • Art ScottArt Scott Registered Users Posts: 8,959 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2006
    Very cool Idea and I agree with others on composition.
    Good luck
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  • douglasdouglas Registered Users Posts: 696 Major grins
    edited November 20, 2006
    This is a very cool shot, but my eyes keep focusing on the glass rather than the silhouette aspect.
    Best regards,
    douglas
  • ChrisJChrisJ Registered Users Posts: 2,164 Major grins
    edited November 21, 2006
    douglas wrote:
    This is a very cool shot, but my eyes keep focusing on the glass rather than the silhouette aspect.

    Yep, I agree with this... I'm sure you'll come up with something better, Awais!
    Chris
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