At the duck pond

kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
edited December 8, 2006 in People
Here are some pictures from my second shoot ever...still learning, so I'm not charging yet, but I'm hoping to move in that direction. Any feedback, comments, tips, whatever welcome! -Kate

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  • kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    I'm having trouble linking more than one picture...
  • urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    kmh wrote:
    I'm having trouble linking more than one picture...

    these are adorable. Love the composition and colors in #2
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  • kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    One more...
  • kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    Last one!
  • gluwatergluwater Registered Users Posts: 3,599 Major grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    All of these are very cute but I really like #1&2. But in # 1 I would like her to be a little more off center. BTW you are not linking to your pictures but attaching them. That is why you cannot put more than one image in each post. Check out how to post pics on dgrin for info on the difference between attaching an image and embedding it.
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  • PhyxiusPhyxius Registered Users Posts: 1,396 Major grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    Yay! Nice job!

    1st shot is really nice, relaxed, and natural. The only thing I'd change is to have had her more to the right side of the frame, thinking along the lines of the rule of thirds. This would also give her more space to look off into. :)

    2 and 4 are nice too, but I think they could have benefitted from a little bit of fill flash.

    Number 3 is cute too and works well as a black and white. I'm not a conversion expert, but I'm sure someone will mention setting black/white points to get some more "pop" :)

    Great job!
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  • kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
    edited November 29, 2006
    Better? I also tried 5x4, but I liked this one better.

    Thanks so much for the feedback! And I'm trying the proper way to link to a url (hope it works).

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  • gluwatergluwater Registered Users Posts: 3,599 Major grins
    edited November 30, 2006
    The link and the crop work just fine thumb.gif.
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  • elfving73elfving73 Registered Users Posts: 941 Major grins
    edited November 30, 2006
    Hihi! They are adorable, so sweet! Wonderful pics too!

    Matty
    kmh wrote:
    Last one!
  • MyViewMyView Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited November 30, 2006
    These are very nice! I really like the composition in #2. In the last two of the girls together, I would've used a reflector to bounce light back on their faces or fill flashed (I personally prefer a reflector, just personal preference though). I think these are adorable though and I am sure your client will be very very pleased.
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  • DeeDee Registered Users Posts: 2,981 Major grins
    edited November 30, 2006
    Reflector
    I was just going to suggest a big white reflector (large posterboard or foamcore board is fine) would have added just the right amount of reflected fill light in her face.

    You can use fill flash too, but that's trickier when you are first starting.

    It looks like you have the posing and pressing the shutter down at the right moment down well!

    You are luck to have such adorable subjects willing to pose for you too.
  • kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
    edited December 1, 2006
    Thank you again for everyone's comments.

    Here's another try at the B&W. Better?

    Re: the lighting, I had back lighting to work with, which I love, but it is always tricky for me. I do have a reflector (5-in-one) but have never used it. I'm still a little overwhelmed trying to get the picture right while interacting with the kids and the parents, and think if I had to add something else to fumble with I'd be too spazzy (for lack of a better word!). Any tips? I assume a parent would hold it -- where exactly, and do you find it takes away from the spontaneity of the moment? I'm aiming for natural shots...even if they're posed, I like them to be candid.114067092-L.jpg
  • MyViewMyView Registered Users Posts: 153 Major grins
    edited December 1, 2006
    kmh - I have no problem having the parent hold the reflector, if the can't because of entertaining the kiddo's, it's amazing the positions I can figure out in order to balance my big reflector and shoot at the same time. I don't think it takes away from the spontaneity of the shooting at all. For a shot like this I would just fill the light back in on their faces. I actually try to do the whenever I have backlighting then I don't get the halo effect. I am not saying what I do is right, I'm still learning also, I'm just saying what works for me or what I do. Someone else may have better advice. I have used many different things to prop my reflector also, I use a tripod or if I'm shooting inside the options are much greater.

    It's a very beautiful shot though and I love their expressions. What darling little girls.
    Lissa
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    Gear
    Nikon D200
    Nikon D70
    Nikon N70
    Nikkor 24-70 f2.8
    Nikkor 50mm f1.8
    Tamron 28-75 f2.8
    Nikkor 18-70
    Tamron 75-300
    SB-600
  • JimMJimM Registered Users Posts: 1,389 Major grins
    edited December 1, 2006
    All are very cute and nice, but that first one is absolutely fantastic!!!

    Great work! clap.gif
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  • kmhkmh Registered Users Posts: 93 Big grins
    edited December 8, 2006
    Again, thanks for the comments and suggestions. Lissa, I will try to use my reflector the next time I shoot, and maybe I'll bring my tripod just in case. Are you aiming to get catchlights, too, or mainly just to brighten their faces? I'm guessing the catchlights are a little trickier to get if you're holding it yourself while you're shooting! -Kate
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