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Christmas by the fire

DJ-S1DJ-S1 Registered Users Posts: 2,303 Major grins
edited February 2, 2005 in Holy Macro
This is the setting for my day-after-Christmas actually, my mother-in-law's house. I would appreciate critiques, thanks!

Tv 1/4
Av 2.8
ISO 50

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    GREAPERGREAPER Registered Users Posts: 3,113 Major grins
    edited January 2, 2005
    I just saw this and am not sure how I missed it. I do not have any improvements to suggest and I think it deserves a bump to the top.

    It's a nice shot with a very warm holiday feel. It would make a nice greeting card. Nicely done.
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    USAIRUSAIR Registered Users Posts: 2,646 Major grins
    edited January 2, 2005
    Dj-S1
    I have to agree with Greaper not sure how I missed this.
    Very nice shot I can feel the warmth of the fire.
    It will make a great Christmas card.
    Only one thing I would do is use the ps perspective tool on it just a little.

    Thanks
    Fred
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    DJ-S1DJ-S1 Registered Users Posts: 2,303 Major grins
    edited January 4, 2005
    Thanks for the kind words guys. thumb.gif
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    pathfinderpathfinder Super Moderators Posts: 14,697 moderator
    edited January 4, 2005
    DJ-S1 wrote:
    Thanks for the kind words guys. thumb.gif


    With a littel perspective correction, it will make a perfect Christmas Card. Looks very warm and homey. 1drink.gif
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    DJ-S1DJ-S1 Registered Users Posts: 2,303 Major grins
    edited January 6, 2005
    Well, I'm not great at perspective correction, but I took a stab at it. Is this better?

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    pathfinderpathfinder Super Moderators Posts: 14,697 moderator
    edited January 6, 2005
    DJ-S1 wrote:
    Well, I'm not great at perspective correction, but I took a stab at it. Is this better?

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    Yes it is better, but it still has a little barrel distortion - see how the horizontal wood on the wall curves downward to the left. It may be difficult to correct that and keep the fireplace rectilinear. Not sure.

    Don't you just hate us nit pickers? :D
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    DJ-S1DJ-S1 Registered Users Posts: 2,303 Major grins
    edited January 6, 2005
    pathfinder wrote:
    Yes it is better, but it still has a little barrel distortion - see how the horizontal wood on the wall curves downward to the left. It may be difficult to correct that and keep the fireplace rectilinear. Not sure.

    Don't you just hate us nit pickers? :D
    Nope, I'm one of 'em! I had to put guides on the fireplace top and sides because they didn't look right to me, even though they turned out to be. And the top rows on the wall bug me quite a bit. I actually like the original better than this one.
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    snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited January 7, 2005
    Sorry I missed this one too...
    DJ-S1 wrote:
    Nope, I'm one of 'em! I had to put guides on the fireplace top and sides because they didn't look right to me, even though they turned out to be. And the top rows on the wall bug me quite a bit. I actually like the original better than this one.
    I agree that it could use a tiny perspective correction. I also noticed that the hearth rug was askew and off to the right. Wish you had moved it, but then it does look kind of natural there. That's how mine usually looks.:D The mood of the picture is so relaxed and warm and inviting. Good job!
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    AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited February 2, 2005
    This is a greeting card waiting to be printed. Beautiful! clap.gif
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