Typical windows from an old building in the old Oporto downtown, also showing with pride the flag in support for our team in Euro2008 .
Paulo,
thank you!
Technically, it's avalid entry, but since we are all trying to become better photogs, a few lines of C&C:
1) Lighting sucks. Buildiong is too dark, sky is too bright.
2) Angle is lame. It should be either bolder, or "dead on", at least from left-right perspective.
3) Flag is a nice touch!
I presume it was taking in the evening, try an early morning shoht with windows reflecting the sky/sun, and try to frame the sky out, leaving only the building face. You may wanna try to get farther back and use longer focal length.
Paulo,
thank you!
Technically, it's avalid entry, but since we are all trying to become better photogs, a few lines of C&C:
1) Lighting sucks. Buildiong is too dark, sky is too bright.
2) Angle is lame. It should be either bolder, or "dead on", at least from left-right perspective.
3) Flag is a nice touch!
I presume it was taking in the evening, try an early morning shoht with windows reflecting the sky/sun, and try to frame the sky out, leaving only the building face. You may wanna try to get farther back and use longer focal length.
HTH
tanks for the C&C, i'm still 'green' in photography , but this forum is a great place to learn the technics and tips, and the assignments is a great way to pratice.
I'll try to get a better shot of that building
I hope that I am posting this correctly. Not sure how to do this.
Image reduced to Black & White via Photoshop.
This is an old abandaned Sugar plantaion house in Hawaii.
Enjoy.
Peter,
great image, solid entry, thank you very much!
Peter,
great image, solid entry, thank you very much!
Aloha,
Thank you for the kind words. I wasn't really sure on how to post and didn't want to intrude upon someone Else's post.
Regarding the image:
If one looks carefully one can see through the house to a window beyond. In the color image that was quite prononced but got kinda lost in the transision to Black & white.
Found in an abondoned building near Seaport Village here in San Diego...
It's the most interesting window I've found since I first saw this assignment, what with the layers of windows and the rigid geometry in front... at least to me!!
Found in an abondoned building near Seaport Village here in San Diego...
It's the most interesting window I've found since I first saw this assignment, what with the layers of windows and the rigid geometry in front... at least to me!!
I agree, great window!
"May the f/stop be with you!"
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Glass Ceiling
The ceiling of a green house near the building where I work, viewed through a window. There's a touch of reflection on the window and suggestions of clouds beyond the glass ceiling.
The ceiling of a green house near the building where I work, viewed through a window. There's a touch of reflection on the window and suggestions of clouds beyond the glass ceiling.
Cheers,
Gretchen
Gretchen, thank you, nice window!
Next time watch your stance: frame is tilted!
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Paulo Campos
My photos at Flickr
thank you!
Technically, it's avalid entry, but since we are all trying to become better photogs, a few lines of C&C:
1) Lighting sucks. Buildiong is too dark, sky is too bright.
2) Angle is lame. It should be either bolder, or "dead on", at least from left-right perspective.
3) Flag is a nice touch!
I presume it was taking in the evening, try an early morning shoht with windows reflecting the sky/sun, and try to frame the sky out, leaving only the building face. You may wanna try to get farther back and use longer focal length.
HTH
tanks for the C&C, i'm still 'green' in photography
I'll try to get a better shot of that building
Paulo Campos
My photos at Flickr
I hope that I am posting this correctly. Not sure how to do this.
Image reduced to Black & White via Photoshop.
This is an old abandaned Sugar plantaion house in Hawaii.
Enjoy.
www.bluelotusguesthouse.com
www.woodshopgallery.com
great image, solid entry, thank you very much!
Aloha,
Thank you for the kind words. I wasn't really sure on how to post and didn't want to intrude upon someone Else's post.
Regarding the image:
If one looks carefully one can see through the house to a window beyond. In the color image that was quite prononced but got kinda lost in the transision to Black & white.
Mahalo, Peter
www.bluelotusguesthouse.com
www.woodshopgallery.com
www.kabestudios.com
I use a little bit of everything gear wise...
Nikon/Canon/Sony/GoPro/Insta360º/Mavic 2 Pro
06/24/08
I just forgot to upload... I shot simple lines and shapes, one, reflections, stairs, windows on the same date... one shop shoot...
Here is a link to the gallery that has everything shot on that date
http://www.pmaphotovideo.com/gallery/5253681_GLDQM#319656421_6FaBW
www.kabestudios.com
I use a little bit of everything gear wise...
Nikon/Canon/Sony/GoPro/Insta360º/Mavic 2 Pro
It's the most interesting window I've found since I first saw this assignment, what with the layers of windows and the rigid geometry in front... at least to me!!
SmugMug QA
My Photos
I agree, great window!
The ceiling of a green house near the building where I work, viewed through a window. There's a touch of reflection on the window and suggestions of clouds beyond the glass ceiling.
Cheers,
Gretchen
My SmugMug Galleries
Gretchen, thank you, nice window!
Next time watch your stance: frame is tilted!