Not Your Typical beauty Model...

Murphy66

...but beautiful in her own way. Your thoughts?

Owen

I like this photo but I have some comments! (of course.. :P)

I find the balck area infront of her head (part of the fence) draws me to it.
Looks underexposed (a stop)
Needs some contrast!
Crop closer to the top of her head - the towers in the background grab my eye as well. (at this exposure. They get lost in a brighter image)


HTH.

kmh

Nice shot, I like it. Could you crop out a bit on the right and top to move her a little off center and get rid of the towers? Or would you lose her belt? I like the belt in the picture. I'd like to see it either cropped a bit or even a lot, getting in closer to her face...just suggestions though, as I think it works like it is, too. -Kate

saurora

Owen wrote:

I like this photo but I have some comments! (of course.. :P)

I find the balck area infront of her head (part of the fence) draws me to it.
Looks underexposed (a stop)
Needs some contrast!
Crop closer to the top of her head - the towers in the background grab my eye as well. (at this exposure. They get lost in a brighter image)


HTH.

Nice shot...I like the subject and pose. I agree with Owen's comments.

Zoe

I love this girl! And the chain link works well with the image.

I played and brightened it up a bit. I hope it shows up here...

gavin

DAMN the DOF is amazing, i love it. The retouched photo looks awsome now that it is brighter!