I'm not getting a clear 'waiting' theme here. My eyes go to the dad and the big stars (which are cool) and what he's doing. Only secondarily did I find the son. If there was a way to have focused on the son this picture would have been stronger for the challenge, imo.
I like the concept of the 'waiting for treats' thing you have going though.
Looking at it, if you cropped it so that dad's head and upper body were gone, leaving only his hand and most of his arm, it might put more emphasis on the boy and what he is waiting for...
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I'm not getting a clear 'waiting' theme here. My eyes go to the dad and the big stars (which are cool) and what he's doing. Only secondarily did I find the son. If there was a way to have focused on the son this picture would have been stronger for the challenge, imo.
I like the concept of the 'waiting for treats' thing you have going though.
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Good luck,
Ben
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