Waiting for God

ekosch

Would appreciate any comments or suggestions regarding this photo. I am new to digital grin and I really enjoy all of your photos. There are a lot of quality captures here. Thanks!

Quitarita

I like the shot. Nice compostion with the person in the lower right hand corner and seeing so much of the environment.

It reads to me more like 'alone' or 'praying' though. I would have like to see more of the person's expression to help convey the message. Or maybe some alterboys setting up in prep for service.

Also, what might also help is updating the title...something like 'waiting for church service' might be better?

Just some thoughts.

Flyinggina

Quitarita wrote:

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It reads to me more like 'alone' or 'praying' though. I would have like to see more of the person's expression to help convey the message. Or maybe some alterboys setting up in prep for service.

I think you have a potentially good idea but need to think a bit more about how to set it up to really hit the viewer with the idea of "waiting."

Good luck!!

Virginia

cabbey

Flyinggina wrote:

I think you have a potentially good idea but need to think a bit more about how to set it up to really hit the viewer with the idea of "waiting."

To me, that's not "waiting" you've shown, so much as "private time with".