80 - white machine

Angelo

1st attempt at ch. 80

photogmomma

Okay, I keep coming back to this... It's not quite screaming machine at me. It's hollering a bit, but not that loudly. It's more saying "bit white cover thing".

But that's just my 2¢ and someone else may feel differently...

Sean K

I have to agree. First, it doesn't say "machine" to me, and secondly, and this is just a matter of personal preference, but with this subject I'd look for dark and dreary contraptions that imply emotion with a lack thereof.

Otherwise a nice shot though.

Flyinggina

It's a nice abstract Angelo. I like the curves, the play of the greys and white. The crop. But I see a cover not a machine. I don't think a good entry needs to be greasy and dark, but to make me think machine I need to see working parts! Given your wonderful efforts in the past, I know you can come up with a stronger entry.

Virginia

Angelo

Andi, Sean, Virginia...

thanks you for your input and suggestions; all very valid. This was a weak first attempt and I'm anxious to try other subjects.

nalvarez

I think having moving parts is a key component. I'm sure attempt #2 will be a better fit