Fantasmas/phantoms - Lisboa, Portugal

Antonio Correia

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I like it! The poster w/ the blur on the person beside really helps set the mood even though it's in a bright environment.
I would lessen the angle to the poster so you can see that a little clearer w/o having to read the title to see what it says (unless you stare at it for a few).
I'd also try recomposing w/o the dark area in the shot. Unless you do something like underexpose the shot to make that area darker and have someone in all white moving in the dark areas.

Just some thoughts.

Antonio Correia

Thank you for you thoughts Jon.

The poster says fantasma/fantasm.
Fantasma is gouts / phantom in Portuguese.

And she is blurred. It's like a walking phantom near his own poster...

And I like the balance of the picture. May be Phantom is not the best title for the photo...