Things I used to do...

lifesdisciple

Goin through a few pics and was curious as to what you might think of this. I used to shoot all kinds of photos in this genre. This was for a make-up artists portfolio. Would love a little feedback if you have the time. Thanks

Andy

This could be great, it should be a bit of a confusing shot that causes the viewer to really look for everything - but I think it's a bit too close in, and I want more of the left-hand girl's eyes somehow. Bet you have others that are better!

DoctorIt

it's an interesting photo, for sure. Color/exposure wise, it's done well. one thing I'm struggling with is a real focus point. is it the nose of the subject on the right? the hair on the left? I guess I just wish something was stronger, maybe one open eye to catch the attention.

lifesdisciple

how about this. focus isn't real strong but i like the eye better.

Seefutlung

Ahhhhh ... composition much nicer than the first. Strong focal point ... her expression is such that one feels a bit of a voyeur ... an intruder ... interloping on a private relationship from a hidden vantage point ... and now suddenly you've been caught.

I'd crop a bit from the right ... up to the ear as all that white shoulder is a bit distracting and doesn't add to the shot .... a maybe a touch off the hair on the left.

Striking capture ... great expression evoking emotion.

Gary