Nice, but a little bit of fill (reflector?) would make it nicer. Or if you really want to work with her silhoutte, maybe move her directly in front of the window? It's nice as is, though. Thanks for sharing.
I like the exposure more in the second shot, but the head position more in the first. In the first shot, I'd like to see the edge of her hair, and perhaps more of her face (like a hint of her right cheek).
Could you try lightening these areas to see what's there? (probably more than you think) You'll probably also need to increase contrast as you lighten, or it will look flat. You could try the same on her body as well, but just doing the face and leaving the rest of her body as is would lend some mystery, I think.
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great use of light!
this is a very sexy picture, without being tacky or too provocative! i really love it!
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Could you try lightening these areas to see what's there? (probably more than you think) You'll probably also need to increase contrast as you lighten, or it will look flat. You could try the same on her body as well, but just doing the face and leaving the rest of her body as is would lend some mystery, I think.
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