Challenge 83: Does this work?

TylerW

TylerW Registered Users Posts: 428 Major grins

January 26, 2007 edited January 27, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges

"Just one more game"

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swintonphoto Registered Users Posts: 1,664 Major grins

January 27, 2007 edited January 27, 2007

I think cropping out the top 40% of the image would make it very strong.

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urbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins

January 27, 2007 edited January 27, 2007

I really like this take. Your creative approach leaves the viewer looking for the one thing that's not quite readable due to motion blur......Numbers! Nice work. Do think it is a tad underexposed, and could benefit from alternative crops.

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