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gavingavin Registered Users Posts: 411 Major grins
edited January 30, 2007 in People
ANy comments or critique wold be very helpful

alisonbeauty2ij1.jpg
D700 and some glass

www.gjohnstone.com

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    SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited January 29, 2007
    Is this the full image or a crop? I really like the capture, especially around the eyes. The sides fo her face feel a touch too blown out from the backgound. I'm assuming you shot against white to blow it out. There is also a bit too much empty black space as the photo moves down and to the left. If you cropped out the top of her head I'd try to bring that back in and I'd lose some of the lower left regardless. There's a great photo in there.
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    SenecaSeneca Registered Users Posts: 1,661 Major grins
    edited January 30, 2007
    It's a tad bit too bright for me...but otherwise...beautiful model...good job.
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    MalteMalte Registered Users Posts: 1,181 Major grins
    edited January 30, 2007
    Ditto, nice capture but blown highlights. The chest looks almost like a hole straight to the background.

    Malte
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    gavingavin Registered Users Posts: 411 Major grins
    edited January 30, 2007
    Thanks guys, I had a hard time deciding if i blew out the highlights. There not too too bad, i think it depends on how you have your monitor calibrated.

    Thanks for the kind words, il have to watch the light!
    D700 and some glass

    www.gjohnstone.com
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